⊙ 江西省临川一中 陈清鹏

预测一

根据漫画，请以“烟”为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述下面的内容，并就此发表你的评论。

要求：1. 文章必须包括描述和评论两部分；根据内容适当发挥，注意行文连贯。

2. 词数：100词左右。

【预测依据】

看图类写作是高考写作的热点之一，具有一定的难度。内容上多为中学生日常生活中熟悉的经历，社会热点，具有一定的交流性、应用性、时代性、教育性。

【写作指导】

1．要审清写作要求。

2．此题只提供了一幅相关的画图信息。通过观察及写作要求，我们可以确定：（1）体裁：夹叙夹议；（2）人称：须用第三人称；（3）时态：可用一般现在时。

3．审清图画的主题和梗概：一个年轻人在工厂，嘴里正吸着烟，这时他看到工厂里的一个禁止吸烟的标志牌，而工厂本身也正向大气中排放滚滚浓烟。年轻人顿时觉得困惑不解……由此，作者发表评论：相关部门应当采取措施禁止工厂污染自然环境的行为！

4．增加细节，连贯成文，做到层次分明，结构严谨，并准确选用相关词语、句型表达图画内容。

【参考范文】

Smoke

This is a funny and instructive picture. In the picture, a young man is smoking happily in a factory when he sees a sign which means “No smoking” on the wall. But he finds that the factory is giving off large quantities of heavy smoke which makes him feel very puzzled, “Why does the factory forbid people to smoke while the factory itself emits so much poisonous smoke?”

Nowadays, many factories know the danger of smoking to themselves and don’t allow people smoking in the factory. However, they don’t pay any attention to the danger that they cause to the whole society. And they let out lots of polluted smoke which does great harm to our environment.

In my opinion, we could live without most of the industrial products, but we could not survive without nature! Therefore, something must be done to prevent the pollution caused by all factories!

【范文点评】

本文首先对图片内容进行了简短的介绍，接着发表了作者的简短评论。文章结构严谨，审题准确，语言流畅，过渡自然。文章的得分亮点也较多。如最后一段，一句“In my opinion, we could live without most of industrial products, but we could not survive without nature.”，便不入俗套地点明了要采取相关措施的原因！可谓一语惊人，令人深思！

　　预测二

下表是你根据平时了解所得到的中国高三学生选择高考志愿的信息。请你根据该表用英语写一篇简要介绍，向编辑部反映该情况。

注意：

1．文章的开头已为你写好。

2．词数：100词左右。

Chinese senior middle school graduates have different opinions on how to choose their courses and universities.

【预测依据】

在高考中，图表类写作经常出现。其内容上多为中学生日常生活中熟悉的生活经历，以及社会热点。高考志愿填报问题，是考生、家长、社会等非常关注的一个热门话题，对于该话题的报导以及争论是人们经常耳闻目睹的。

【解题指导】

本文从体裁上看属于议论文，其命题方式属于图表类。图表类作文多以说明文和议论文为主，要求考生根据所给的图表、数据及标题进行分析、研究，阅读其中的文字和说明，弄清各种信息之间的关系，提炼和确定出文章的中心思想。然后进行分析、概括和归纳。

注意：（1）图表和数据内容不一定要全部描述。（2）善于抓住总的规律，趋势，归纳增减率。（3）时态：特定时间用过去时。经常出现的情况或自己的评述用一般现在时。

（4）要适当运用一些高级词汇并灵活使用图表类写作常用的经典好句型。

【参考范文】

Chinese senior middle school graduates have different opinions on how to choose their courses and universities.

A survey has been done to study it. We can see from the table that about 35% of the students believe the choice should be based on their own interest. They say interest is the mother of success. Besides, it is a miserable thing to have to spend most of your time studying what you have no interest in.

Ｍｏｒｅｓｔｕｄｅｎｔｓ （ａｒｏｕｎｄ ４５％）, ｈｏｗｅｖｅｒ, ｉｎｓｉｓｔ that main consideration should be given to the needs of the society, for, they argue, not everyone can find the job they like best. What’s more, interest can be born and lost.

Interestingly, there are about 20% who find it too difficult to make a choice and would rather depend on their parents or teachers to make a decision.

【范文点评】

该篇文章从总体上来讲，能够把握议论文的特点。语言流畅，能够正确地利用一些较为高级的词语以及一些精彩短语、句型（文中黑体字）。人称使用正确，为第三人称。能够把握主体时态：用一般现在时。因为是经常出现的情况。能够按题目的要求，涵盖所要求的内容，并适当增添了一些相关内容，较好地完成了写作任务，达到了预定的写作目的。